negative critique

there was no problem with my negatives the only bother was the water spots. i liked all my photos none where blurry or wrong. now i need to figure out how to clean the water spots.

action

the action in this pic is that fire and the emotion show all the action.

the story

the story is told by the expressions and visual knowledge of the girls. plu the way the photo was taken.

the camera

the pinhole camera is sorta like the SLR because they both have light pass threw them to make an image. but are different because they have different speeds and ways to get the light exposure

the image is all blurry and isnt foused on any thing.

the picture is focused on a tree. the flowers are blurry when falling from the tree and some are in complete focus.

i don't like this image to much because its blurry.plus the camera was leaning to much to the right.

i think that this pic is good because it shows emotion and not allot of empty space. plus it isn't slanted